Looks like you're heading in the right direction! As Ben observed, your perspective is good, just need to work on the proportions... It's great to see that you have a handle on perspective, as that's a major part of this, and getting that right takes a lot of work.
Keep it loose and informal... don't try to nail the illustration on the first-go, but rather work up a loose sketch, and then refine your lines, cleaning up an extreaneous linework later on.
Great to see budding talent! Keep it up!
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