yeah, better, can hear when you are on or off the throttle. Take this as a piece of advice, not necessarily armchair quarterbacking: on the two 180 deg turns you are leaving a lot on the table by turning in way too soon. You want to stay out and do a later apex on those so you can shoot into the stretches that follow. I can hear the car is way off throttle when you go thru those without the music and visually I could see before that it was too inside and early.
Here is a vid I know of a guy that runs it and you can see the line I am talking about.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YlA3fyApSps
Have you ran with an instructor? It can be a big help if you are not sure of a good line. You are pretty smooth at the wheel which is hard for many to do so you have that in your favor, but you are leaving a second or two just in those two turns I suspect.