Might be over explaining it a little...but really, it's just a little hard to read due to the lack of commas...it all runs together. I would line item the add, that might help. Here's an example.
What I have for the car:
xxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxx
What it needs:
xxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxx
The history:
xxxxxxxx
This helps break it up for an easier read threw. Hope this helps a bit!! Wish I could take it off your hands!