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Old 12-06-2008, 06:47 PM
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Hey guys, I know some of you on this site are pros, and have done a lot of work for people all over the place, so I would like a critique on one of my latest pieces. It's a 67 Mustang that I rendered for G-Force Design Concepts. Everyone seems to like it which is cool, but I would like some negativity. Negativity is what makes designers/artists better. So have at it. Thanks.

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Old 12-06-2008, 07:07 PM
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looks awesome in my opinion!
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Old 12-06-2008, 07:14 PM
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Looks good. Looks alot like the car that Bobby Alloway built a couple years ago.
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Old 12-06-2008, 08:38 PM
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It looks really great...but...I'm tired of seeing Shelby stripes on every Mustang ever built.

That's all the negativity I could muster.
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Old 12-06-2008, 08:51 PM
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Looks out of proportion.....windshiled slope looks wrong. Good start
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Old 12-06-2008, 10:21 PM
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Looks good, if I had to be negative like you asked for the wheels look to thin sort of wonky crooked and toy like.
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